环形山ring mountain n.
陨石坑cloud stone pit n.
My dear friends,
Tourism is developing very fast, and I am sure that in future the spaceship will manage to send people to have a travel on the moon. There are five ring mountains named after Chinese people, such as Zhang Heng ring mountain, Zu Chongzhi ring mountain, and so on. So we are certain to travel there. Besides, we will visit the huge cloud stone pit to take some stones so that we can study the unknown life on the moon. It is certain that moon travel will be very exciting. Besides, it must be very helpful for human beings to know more about the moon and the universe, and it may help us build our future home there. That’s all. Thank you.
本篇短文基本覆盖了写作任务要求的内容,写出了月球旅游的内容和感受。所使用的词汇和语法结构也基本能满足写作要求。但仍存在一些不足:1. 文章的开头部分有些唐突,缺少过渡性话语。2. 在旅游内容方面,没有适当地发挥,所以使得文章的内容不太充实。
My dear friends,
I believe that one day human beings will travel to the moon in spaceships just as easily as we fly to other countries now. On the moon, people in space suits will climb mountains, and enjoy the beautiful full view of the earth. Tour guides will take us to see cloud stone pits which may give us some clues of the origins of life. People will also be able to visit Guanghan Palace, and meet Chang’e and her rabbit, just like in the Chinese fairy tale. Traveling to the moon will be very exciting. It will also help us learn more about the moon and the universe. After we learn more about the moon, it will be possible for us to build homes on the moon too. That’s all. Thank you.
1. Because of the rapid development of technology, our world will change a lot in many ways in the future.
2. To our great joy, it is now getting easier for us to travel outside of the earth and go to places such as the moon.
3. What will the world be like in the future? We can only guess, but we can be sure that it will be much different from what it is today.
4. Scientists are finding new ways to make houses for us to live in.
5. Many changes are on the way for people in the near future.
Thank you for loving and supporting me. I feel very happy to see you at home when I come back after school every day. At the same time I often feel sorry when I see you cooking and doing other housework. You must be tired. How I wish I could invent a cooking machine and give it to you as a gift！This machine would cook all kinds of delicious food. All you would need to do is buy all of the things that are needed for the dish and then tell it how to cook the meal. In that way, cooking will be very easy and relaxing and you will never be tired again. Then you will have more time to be with us. Wouldn’t that be great? I’m sure it will happen one day.
Your daughter, Lucy