你有没有设想过未来的学校生活会是怎样？请以"One Day in Future School"为题写一篇文章,投稿给校刊英文版的"异想天开"栏目。写作要求:
One Day in Future School
The technology is developing fast, which will greatly change our school life.
First, our teaching equipment will change and teaching will become more interesting. There will be a computer on each student’s desk. The computer will provide students with the content of their classes. And our teaching method and school activities will be greatly improved. There will be more interesting discussion classes. Our difficulties and problems can be solved when we discuss in class with classmates and teacher. Finally, we will have more colorful activities. For example, we may have a football game with other class in the afternoon, which seems impossible in today’s school life. The future school life will bring us into a wonderful world. We are looking forward to it.
One Day in Future School
As soon as I enter the classroom in the morning, I press the red button on my desk and the computer screen on my desk comes on. After sending my homework to my teacher by email, I begin to read the content of today’s class on the screen. The bell is ringing as the teacher comes in. All the students turn off their screens because today we are going to have a discussion about global warming. This is the second discussion class this week. We all enjoy discussion classes because they are interesting and we can learn a lot from them. During lunch time, I can order my favorite food with the help of a computer. It can also tell me which food is the healthiest. In the afternoon we’ll have a football match with Class 3, which makes me excited the whole morning.
This is one day in future school. It will bring us knowledge as well as interesting activities.
修改后的成稿符合记叙文的写作要求。首先,文章按照时间顺序叙述了"我"在未来学校中的一天的生活,内容完整、主题突出。其次,文章的最后一段用一句话概括了文章的主旨大意,点明未来的学校生活既可以让我们学到知识,又能带来更多的课外活动。最后,成稿中不仅运用了定语从句"In the afternoon we’ll have a football match with Class 3, which makes me excited the whole morning.",还使用了较多的连接词和短语,如"as soon as"和"during lunch time",使文章读起来连贯通顺。
1. In the future, people will make use of ... to make their lives easier. 2. People’s lives will be greatly improved with the use of ...
3. As soon as I turn on the computer, I can ...
4. Unlike today, future life will enable us to ...
5. We can save lots of money and energy with the help of ..., which is very different from today.
互联网的潜力正在不断地被挖掘出来,它可以为人们的生活带来更多的便利。也许有一天,人们无需出门,在家就可利用互联网看病求医。现某英文医疗网站正在建设网络就医系统,请你发挥想像力,以"Internet Doctor System"为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的新点子。
Internet Doctor System
Due to rapid development in online technology, many people now can save time and money by getting a health check online.
If you have a headache, you can click the head of the person’s body on a computer screen. Then the screen will show different feelings your headache might cause. According to your situation, the computer will tell you the reason for your illness. After the examination, you will be able to go to the online drugstore to buy medicine for yourself. The Internet Doctor System makes our lives easier. However, if you have a serious illness or problem, you should go to see your doctor.